My best friend is Cristina. She'e 13 years old. Her birthady is on 14th February, on Valantine's day and she hasn't got any brothers or sisters, but she has got tow fish, they haven't got name.
She is tall and thin. Her hair is brown, long and straight. Her eyes are browns too. She go to Olivar Gran and at same class that me. Her favourite subject is music, due to outside school she goes to music classes and she plays the violin.
She likes study and read books, abore all books of fantasi, move oves she likes ride a horse, on the one hand because she likes sport but on the other hand because she likes the horses.
Subscriure's a:
Comentaris del missatge (Atom)
2 comentaris:
Well done, Cristina, but there are some spelling mistakes. Revise also she likes readING...Remember ING after like.
Marta,
there are some mistakes. Let's correct them:
-She's
-two
-brown and not browns ( in English there is no plural for adjectives)
-goES ( 3rd person sing)
-at THE same class THAN me
- studYING and readING ( remember, after like add ING to the ver)
-above all..fantasy
-more over
-riDING
-She likes horses ( without THE)
COrrect them, please!
See you!
Publica un comentari a l'entrada